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Monday, May 25, 2020

my birthday

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6 comments:

  1. Te wateaMay 25, 2020 at 10:09 AM

    very good ethan i like what you have written you are a goodm writer
    from Te Watea your besty

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  2. Ella JMay 25, 2020 at 10:10 AM

    next time I think you can add some were you played hide and go seek tag

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  3. PaoraMay 25, 2020 at 10:10 AM

    that sounds like a amazing birthday party and such a yummy cake too!!!!!

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  4. TomMay 25, 2020 at 10:12 AM

    Hi Ethan can you put more fullstop's in so I don't have to have no brief for a long time from tom

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  5. AmeliaMay 25, 2020 at 10:29 AM

    well done Ethan it sounds like you had a lot of fun maby next you could put some full stop so your reader does not hafe to take a lot of breaths in betwwen.

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